On 2006-04-05, Jay R. Yablon <jyablon@nycap.rr.com> wrote:

> I have just posted a DRAFT paper to:

>

> http://home.nycap.rr.com/jry/Papers/...ce%20Paper.pdf

>

> This paper is titled: "Is the Lorentz Force Law Based Upon a Relation

> Between rho=mu+p Perfect Fluids and alpha=1 Kerrighan-Type Electromagnetic

> Energy Tensors?"

>

> I would appreciate your review and comment on this draft before I consider

> next steps.
Dear Jay, your paper draft is 30 pages long. Which is too long for me,

and I'm sure many other s.p.r patrons, to read in detail. If you really

want feed back, you may be interested in the following exercise in

efficient communication.

Can you summarize the technical (mathematical) content of your work in

one paragraph? In advance, I can't necessarily say that this will be

possible. But you won't know unless you try. It is also a good test of

whether your terminology is standard enough to be recognizable by people

familiar with the mathematical background.

Perhaps in another paragraph, can you summarize the physical

interpretation of your technical results? Usually, this involves

relating mathematical objects to things we can measure in the lab. At

this stage, you should also consider consistency with known physics and

possible measurable predictions.

Igor