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LSulayman
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Hello,
I'm working on an assignment where I explain some things about the universe.
This is what I'm writing about and also in the order in which I'm writing about it:
Part I The Shape of the Universe
Matter
The static model of the universe
A universe which is not static but:
closed universe
flat universe
open universe
Part II Evidence for the expanding universe
Measuring the age of the universe
Other evidence
What role does dark matter have in an expanding universe?
Now my teacher told me that the order in which I'm telling these things isn't right, somethings not ok with the structure...
Since I'm not an expert on the expanding universe (I'm not a physicist or an astronomer) It's really frustrating to understand what the right order is, when to write about what.
Also Part I and Part II have to have a connection. But how to explain?
Can someone help me out?
I'm working on an assignment where I explain some things about the universe.
This is what I'm writing about and also in the order in which I'm writing about it:
Part I The Shape of the Universe
Matter
The static model of the universe
A universe which is not static but:
closed universe
flat universe
open universe
Part II Evidence for the expanding universe
Measuring the age of the universe
Other evidence
What role does dark matter have in an expanding universe?
Now my teacher told me that the order in which I'm telling these things isn't right, somethings not ok with the structure...
Since I'm not an expert on the expanding universe (I'm not a physicist or an astronomer) It's really frustrating to understand what the right order is, when to write about what.
Also Part I and Part II have to have a connection. But how to explain?
Can someone help me out?