Originally Posted by Caracrist
and been caught, by them
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Is that comma necessary?
As long as I'm dwelling on grammar, I'll read the entire entry.
Originally Posted by Caracrist
They told brothers to play
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You need a "the" after told.
Originally Posted by Caracrist
looser
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Loser only has one "o."
Originally Posted by Caracrist
They left braught-board and got out for a while
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Brought is spelled incorrectly. There should be commas...I won't bother to point out where. And, I believe that it should be "went" instead of "got."
This is atrocious, I refuse to read farther. I'm sorry if these comments offend the poster or any reader, but if a question is not phrased correctly then I don't see why it should be answered.