Would anyone be willing to critique my personal statement and statement of purpose?

gravenewworld

I really need to hit a HR with these. Would anyone be willing to critique them for me? I feel like a complete stranger would give me the most honest feedback rather than my friends or co-workers since they may be afraid that they would offend me.

cristo

Let's start this thread again, shall we, writing in English and responding only if you have a useful comment for the OP.

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gravenewworld	Would anyone be willing to critique my personal statement and statement of purpose? Tweet I really need to hit a HR with these. Would anyone be willing to critique them for me? I feel like a complete stranger would give me the most honest feedback rather than my friends or co-workers since they may be afraid that they would offend me.

cristo Mentor	Let's start this thread again, shall we, writing in English and responding only if you have a useful comment for the OP.