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I am the world..

by Zygotic Embryo
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Zygotic Embryo
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Apr10-05, 10:00 PM
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I am the world, the oceans are my blood
Continents are skin; the atmosphere- my lungs
I've no energy left, you spent it all- now I'm done
But I can't leave, my life revolves around my sun
Even Jimi Hendrix called my Axis Bold as Love
The equator is my belt, but Atlas holds me up
Every time I sweat, it's like a thick dew falls
Plus I'm sexually frustrated; I'm a big blue-ball
If I ever get my ozone fixed, well that'll be the day
Why chop down the rainforests? I don't need a shave
My canyons are cuts & gashes break open chasms
Tectonic plates are muscles, earthquakes are spasms
Half of me shivers while the other half wallows in heat
I just wish the moon would stop following me
Volcanoes are my zits, spewing pus born in mantle
I've been here long enough to blow out 4 billion candles
My craters are bruises & I've got 'em all the way 'round
But who threw these rocks? Bullies on the playground?
I'm stargazing, staring every bright light down
Other planets are jealous I've got life right now
Just lay down on your belly… we'll be face to face
I am the world & all I do is take up space


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dextercioby
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Apr10-05, 10:03 PM
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One question:is it your creation?It sucks.

Daniel.
Zygotic Embryo
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Apr10-05, 10:04 PM
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Yeah. I wrote it a while ago.

dextercioby
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Apr10-05, 10:07 PM
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I am the world..

Okay,then it is nice. But i'm not really a literature critique...

Daniel.
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Apr10-05, 10:37 PM
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What's so great about the words of Jimi Hendrix over the others of this planet or world?
hypatia
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Apr10-05, 10:47 PM
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But I believe the earth is a liveing entity..
Just ask the axis, he knows everything*


*Bold as Love
stoned
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Apr10-05, 11:10 PM
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Quote Quote by Zygotic Embryo
Plus I'm sexually frustrated; I'm a big blue-ball

I don't see reason to be frustrated ? you have Venus not far away
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Apr10-05, 11:19 PM
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I don't see reason to be frustrated ? you have Venus not far away
(Okay, it only deserved 1, but there's that 10 character thing. What's that about, anyhow?)
Smurf
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Apr11-05, 12:26 AM
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Quote Quote by dextercioby
One question:is it your creation?It sucks.

Daniel.
I suspect there is more to this post than meets the eye.

Edit: Oh look, there it is!
Mk
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Apr11-05, 02:37 AM
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Quote Quote by dextercioby
One question:is it your creation?It sucks.

Daniel.
lol, but it is creative and rhymes well for something he wrote up in probably a few minutes.
Zygotic Embryo
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Apr11-05, 06:18 AM
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ah, what is up mK
matthyaouw
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Apr11-05, 06:40 AM
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Quote Quote by stoned
I don't see reason to be frustrated ? you have Venus not far away
And she's HOT
mapper
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Apr11-05, 05:37 PM
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Ive enjoyed reading that Zygotic Embryo. You should submit that to one of those poetry sites.


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