Let's Make a Story with Four Words Per Post

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Discussion Overview

The thread explores a collaborative storytelling activity where participants contribute to a narrative by adding four words at a time. The discussion includes various contributions to the story, as well as commentary on the format and coherence of the storytelling process.

Discussion Character

  • Exploratory
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Main Points Raised

  • One participant initiates the story with "there once was a..."
  • Another participant continues with "Tiger named Speedo, who..."
  • Subsequent contributions include various whimsical elements, such as a tiger trying to kill Evil Bob and a danger bird.
  • Some participants express frustration with the four-word limit, suggesting that it hinders coherent storytelling and proposing longer contributions instead.
  • There are calls for participants to pay attention to previous posts to maintain narrative continuity.
  • One participant humorously notes the absurdity of a bird using a stungun.
  • Another participant reflects on the difficulty of maintaining a coherent story with the imposed constraints.
  • Several participants reference past storytelling threads as examples of better formats.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

Participants express mixed feelings about the four-word format, with some advocating for longer contributions to enhance coherence while others continue to follow the original format. The discussion remains unresolved regarding the best approach to storytelling in this format.

Contextual Notes

Participants highlight the challenges of maintaining grammatical structure and narrative flow within the constraints of the four-word limit. There are references to previous threads that may serve as better examples of collaborative storytelling.

Who May Find This Useful

Readers interested in collaborative storytelling, creative writing exercises, or those looking for examples of community engagement in narrative creation may find this thread useful.

JamesU
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this has probably been done before, but ayway...

I'll start off a story with four words. the next person who posts will continue the story with 4 more words and so on. I'll start:

there once was a...
 
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Yep, it's been tried before and got pretty lame pretty quickly, but I'm willing to give it another try.

...Tiger named Speedo, who...
 
...decided he woul try...
 
to kill Evil Bob
 
but instead, he decided...
 
...to tickle him with...

(Edited because yomamma was too fast.)
 
a feather from a
 
danger bird. then he...
 
...skipped away to see...

(Hint: folks are going to have to use punctuation and capitalization properly if we're going to keep track of where sentences begin and end.)
 
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the danger bird named
 
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pulled out his stungun...
 
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...and aimed it...

edited for length
 
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at the evil Bob
 
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(Not part of the story...what the heck sort of name is "pulled out a stungun" for a bird!? :smile: Shall we pause until some folks catch up? This is a tough type of thread to keep going when lots of people are around.)
 
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.But then, Bob said
 
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(Well, if nobody wants to edit anything, I guess we can proceed.)

...that bird doesn't scare...
 
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Guys, 4 words is too short to have a coherent story line. Let's make it 1-2 sentences, at least.
 
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6 words is the highest I'm going

me, said speedo. and suddenly, a...
 
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Evo said:
Guys, 4 words is too short to have a coherent story line. Let's make it 1-2 sentences, at least.


Here here.
 
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Evo said:
Guys, 4 words is too short to have a coherent story line. Let's make it 1-2 sentences, at least.
That also makes it a tad more resistant to the grammatically challenged. :rolleyes:
 
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...large dolphin flying a black helicopter...

(it's always a bad idea to end your sentence with 'suddenly'...)
 
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that was stolen from
 
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...a Polish superspy.
 
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The next day I looked up...
 
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and saw a giant
 
  • #26
4 word post that's to be 6.
 
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..., white cumulus cloud at low altitude...
 
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and went inside. then he...
 
  • #29
Is this story supposed to make any sense? :rolleyes:
 

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