Constructive criticism on fiction

  • Thread starter Pyrite
  • Start date
  • #1
23
0
Since i've been gone, I've written a sizable amount of fiction. today, i figured i could bring it to Physicsforums and see what people have to say about it. its at http://mildcompetence.myrmid.com/stories.html [Broken]
btw ignore the ones under the "Dead Men" header, as those arn't all that good.
 
Last edited by a moderator:

Answers and Replies

  • #2
eNtRopY
Originally posted by Pyrite
Since i've been gone, I've written a sizable amount of fiction. today, i figured i could bring it to Physicsforums and see what people have to say about it. its at http://mildcompetence.myrmid.com/stories.html [Broken]
btw ignore the ones under the "Dead Men" header, as those arn't all that good.
Your prose seems somewhat reminiscent of Kafka... or maybe Theodore Sturgeon... mixed with certain element of comic book action. However, I strongly criticize your atrocious grammar. Seriously, your ideas seem original, but you will need to make vast improvements in the area of language mechanics if you ever want to be taken seriously by the publishing industry.

eNtRopY
 
Last edited by a moderator:
  • #3
23
0
This is news to me. Could you possibly be a bit more specific/give examples?
 

Related Threads on Constructive criticism on fiction

  • Last Post
Replies
11
Views
2K
  • Last Post
2
Replies
25
Views
22K
  • Last Post
2
Replies
31
Views
3K
Replies
37
Views
14K
  • Last Post
Replies
2
Views
904
Replies
5
Views
2K
  • Last Post
Replies
9
Views
5K
  • Last Post
Replies
6
Views
5K
Replies
1
Views
1K
  • Last Post
Replies
1
Views
2K
Top