I would apreciate some proof-readers giving their comments on my answer to an bit of CourseWork for Undergrad Physics 2nd Year. 1. The problem statement, all variables and given/known data Question: http://www.mediafire.com/file/malicjnkzry/PHYS08003 [Broken] - Course Work.doc 2. Relevant equations None 3. The attempt at a solution http://www.mediafire.com/file/mzjy2j55m3k/Tom's [Broken] OW&F Coursework.docx Any comments (good or bad) would be very much apreciated, but please don't post revisions of any of my paragraphs, as I dont want to plagerise anyone elses ideas. Thank you everyone! :D Ps. Please ignore any spelling/grammar problems as im dislexic and so this will be sorted out in the final draft, once I have finalised the content required.