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Essay critique needed

  1. Dec 5, 2007 #1
    Essay critique needed!!!!

    I need help on my essay for admission into law school. Please any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
     
    Last edited: Dec 5, 2007
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  3. Dec 5, 2007 #2

    cristo

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    I don't get it.. are you actually running a marathon?
     
  4. Dec 5, 2007 #3
    Change the last line to:

    "I have never been more confident in my abilities; I will succeed."
     
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