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five syllables here;
seven syllables here, and
five syllables here.
make your own and post them
seven syllables here, and
five syllables here.
make your own and post them
I think it's just scary that after all these years, I still remember a haiku I wrote in elementary school!yomamma said:no wonder you're a biologist and not a literary expert
I'm sure most 3rd grade haikus are pretty bad. I've never had any talent for poetry of any kind. I could get away with decent grades for the technical merit, but the creative/artistic part was not there. I have all sorts of useless crap stuck in my head.yomamma said:and it was a crappy haiku too.
I remember, in like 3rd grade, my haiku was something about a garden, like with a worm in it, I don't remember it though...
zoobyshoe said:The roaring whisper
of a small desk fan muffles
my chattering thoughts.
Jelfish said:Praise to zoobyshoe!
Such esoteric vision.
I'm going to bed.
Moonbear said:Zooby, you write good
haikus! Okay, so I see
it's possible now.
hypnagogue said:puddles glisten streets
leaves downcast, eyes following
a stranger walks past
because if you canmattmns said:Poetry is crap!
It really really is, so
why bother with it?