Island of Doctor Moreau narrative

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Ever seen the film 'Island of Doctor Moreau'? Well, there's a newly filmed version of it here. I condensed the whole basic narrative into less than two minutes. I present to you the final cut of my film - THE ISLAND OF DR MOREAU!

if you do watch it, can you suggest any improvements before I start duplicating it for DVD distribution?

video here - http://www.vimeo.com/clip=18171 [Broken]
 
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Well, the part of the Dr, you did quite well in speech and mannor. The young man didn't look shocked enough. And to be a ape-man, you should probally study the facial expressions of the great apes. They have a side to side eye movement, and a bearing of the teeth when they are angry and powering up.

PS the new page to view it on its great!
 

omega2

Well, the part of the Dr, you did quite well in speech and mannor. The young man didn't look shocked enough. And to be a ape-man, you should probally study the facial expressions of the great apes. They have a side to side eye movement, and a bearing of the teeth when they are angry and powering up.
thanks for the informative feedback. if i ever redo it, i shall endeavour to incorporate what you've said.:biggrin:
 

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