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Need some help on this Financial aid appeal letter to the committee at my community college. I was going to post this to academic guidance thread, but physics is not involved.
I went over 150% of program hours and they will not pay for my class that is actually towards my A.A. degree. BTW, the course I need to complete is Elementary Spanish II for my foreign language requirement. Please, if you have the time, review my letter and tell me what needs work.
Here it is:
Dear Financial Aid Appeal Committee,
I would like to thank the committee for taking the time to review my letter.
This letter is to explain the terms on why I have not met my graduation requirements, what are my goals at Valencia, and what actions I will take to graduate as soon as possible.
First, I would like to explain why I have not met my graduation requirements. The reason why I' am taking too long on completing my graduation requirements is because I wanted to take more courses that goes towards my major in physics and study for the Spanish CLEP exam to complete my A.A. general studies foreign language requirement.
I did try to learn a new language, which is French, however; I believe it was a mistake to learn a new language and decided to withdraw Elementary French I. Thus, I decided to visit the Academic Advising office and one of the advisers told me that I can study for the Spanish CLEP exam and try to complete the foreign language requirement.
Because I' am a bit fluent in the Spanish language, I decided to take the Spanish CLEP exam. I have only earned four credit hours and it was not enough to have met the foreign language requirement because I needed eight or more credits to meet the requirements for the section.
My goals at Valencia is to complete the foreign language requirement that goes towards my A.A. general studies degree and finish the last section of a calculus course, calculus III. Hopefully, I can meet the foreign language requirement section and earn the A.A. degree to transfer to a four year university. With all the prerequisites that I completed towards my major in physics, I can complete a four year university in one or two years.
The action I will take to graduate soon is to complete the Elementary Spanish II course and meet the foreign language requirement. I will postpone my job search and concentrate on passing this course. After this, I have to make preparations on which four year university would fit my standards and transfer to that university.
I hope I explained the questions clearly on why I have not met my graduation requirements, what are my goals at Valencia, and what actions I will take to complete my graduation requirements.(still working on the conclusion)
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This is a problem because if I don't pay for my classes for the spring semester, I will never get my A.A. degree and transfer to a four year university. Opinions are welcome.
Need some help on this Financial aid appeal letter to the committee at my community college. I was going to post this to academic guidance thread, but physics is not involved.
I went over 150% of program hours and they will not pay for my class that is actually towards my A.A. degree. BTW, the course I need to complete is Elementary Spanish II for my foreign language requirement. Please, if you have the time, review my letter and tell me what needs work.
Here it is:
Dear Financial Aid Appeal Committee,
I would like to thank the committee for taking the time to review my letter.
This letter is to explain the terms on why I have not met my graduation requirements, what are my goals at Valencia, and what actions I will take to graduate as soon as possible.
First, I would like to explain why I have not met my graduation requirements. The reason why I' am taking too long on completing my graduation requirements is because I wanted to take more courses that goes towards my major in physics and study for the Spanish CLEP exam to complete my A.A. general studies foreign language requirement.
I did try to learn a new language, which is French, however; I believe it was a mistake to learn a new language and decided to withdraw Elementary French I. Thus, I decided to visit the Academic Advising office and one of the advisers told me that I can study for the Spanish CLEP exam and try to complete the foreign language requirement.
Because I' am a bit fluent in the Spanish language, I decided to take the Spanish CLEP exam. I have only earned four credit hours and it was not enough to have met the foreign language requirement because I needed eight or more credits to meet the requirements for the section.
My goals at Valencia is to complete the foreign language requirement that goes towards my A.A. general studies degree and finish the last section of a calculus course, calculus III. Hopefully, I can meet the foreign language requirement section and earn the A.A. degree to transfer to a four year university. With all the prerequisites that I completed towards my major in physics, I can complete a four year university in one or two years.
The action I will take to graduate soon is to complete the Elementary Spanish II course and meet the foreign language requirement. I will postpone my job search and concentrate on passing this course. After this, I have to make preparations on which four year university would fit my standards and transfer to that university.
I hope I explained the questions clearly on why I have not met my graduation requirements, what are my goals at Valencia, and what actions I will take to complete my graduation requirements.(still working on the conclusion)
(end)
This is a problem because if I don't pay for my classes for the spring semester, I will never get my A.A. degree and transfer to a four year university. Opinions are welcome.