I need help as my 17 year old daughter is beating me. A few months ago my wife, daughter and started a competition to see who could get a book published first. My wife has her Master's in education and my daughter is a 4.0 AP high school senior. I have a BSBA from an online degree mill. So I am at an extreme disadvantage. My book is fictional and includes the development of a device that can record anything (data, images or video) in quantum foam. Guess where I need help. Now I read a ton of books and it amazes me how some technical details are glossed over and then sometimes there is too much information and the reader's eyes glaze over. Where I need help is that the average reader will learn a bit about quantum physics and a technical reader won't be able to poke huge holes in the theory. Well... with the exception that we cannot (currently) use QF as a storage medium. Any help will be appreciated since college physics departments are not returning my phone calls.