I'm from Hong Kong. I would like to study a research degree in oversea (Australia, Singapore or UK). I have written a research proposal in the fields of fluid mechanics and renewable energy. I would like to send it to some of my potential supervisors in the universities. First, may I know where can I find some helps to review my proposal before send to them? Second, how can I introduce myself to them and send them my proposal for consideration? In fact, I have done the above two and submitted everything to two major universities in Singapore (Nanyang Technological University, Singapore and National University of Singapore) but the latter sent me e-mail I got no offer this year. I'm afraid that there is something wrong in my English and my tone. I would like to improve myself before send it to other universities in Australia and UK. Can you give me some advices? Thank you very much! Best Regards, Chris.