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Short Story Feedback

  1. Nov 10, 2012 #1


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    Hey folks. I've written a little short story, about 2400 words, and just want some feedback. It's my 2nd actual story I've ever written before, and it's only the first draft, so don't expect too much from it!

    It's got combat, but no gory details, so I'd say 13+ is a good rating.
    Link's here: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1902742-Lets-NOT-Go-Back-to-the-Stone-Age

    I was going to post this in the writing section, but I'm not really wanting any discussion on the physics aspects of anything.

    Edit: I just noticed I broke 8,000 posts! Go me!
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