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Unrequited Stupidity by Bh-Wiz

  1. Feb 18, 2014 #1
    Unrequited Stupidity

    If I had a dime for every thought
    of these pictures that dominate my heart
    for every time i recalled your face
    by now, I'd be bill gates.

    My heart and mind are overtaken
    my common sense has been forsaken
    Blindly trying to achieve awareness
    instead, i got negligence

    It kills me to know about your carelessness
    What if I'm injured?What if i'm ill?
    Makes no difference
    What if i lay on my deathbed all still?
    You would keep up your heedlessness

    Enough! What has caused me this pain i can't get rid off?
    I say enough of this absurdity
    Some people describe it as one-sided love
    I call it... unrequited stupidity.

    This is my english homework. (to write a poem about unrequited/one-sided love)
    Any thoughts? (im thinking about adding another stanza)
    thanks in advance :)
     
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