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Villanelle poem

  1. Jul 24, 2008 #1
    Tell me what you guys think.

    It's time to say good bye
    It's something we can not hide
    Though we are not ready, we have to try

    Journey as a child flew by
    We made mistakes and always lied
    Now reshaped, now the wise guy

    Now I leave my family with a sigh
    Hoping no regrets, I leave their side
    As I part, tears pervade our eyes

    Walking away, I wet my tears dry
    To my family I never lied;
    about my family love them I


    This is all i got so far, so tell me what you guys think, and give me some feedback :D thnx
     
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