If you're already going to a school, see if you've got a writing center on campus. If so, vist and have a tutor work with you on the piece.I am applying for a scholarship that is very important to me and is not based on financial need. So the essay is a make-or-break deal.
back to sonography, which should take a sentence or a couple more words."Words like "diastolic dysfunction" and "dilated cardiomyopathy" are no longer foreign to me, and I could not be happier. "
I don't have a career, as I'm still a student.What is your current career?Why and how did you choose it? Was it your only choice? Was there any chance for you to choose between 2 or more jobs?