Fair point,
One last question,
Does this part of my SOP for CMU, makes me look unfocused and not aligned with the program?
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my ambitions are toward model-building for beyond the Standard Matter phenomenology and collaborating experimentally to find signatures of said new matter or...
That’s because Csaba Csaki didn’t answer my email. And I understand what you mean by too specific. I’ll try to see into this. Also, I am worried that my SOP doesn’t have my “personality” or “storytelling in it” I couldn’t understand how to go about it and what to focus more on research. Will...
I totally agree with you both. I’d already changed these things and rounded up my SOP within 1000 words, and removed that sentence already.
I’m uploading the edited version.
I first encountered the concept of virtual particles while studying the Casimir effect; I remember pondering how each...
Can somebody help review my SOP. I’ve already applied to one school but have many other schools to apply to, I know it needs lots of improvement so harsh critical comments are welcomed.
Thankyou. I first encountered the concept of virtual particles during my studies of the Casimir effect; I...