Recent content by Hawksmere

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    Graduate How is my short essay so far? Accurate?

    'tis sweet. Sorry for the 'rant' didn't read that is was for the non-acs. And well done!
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    Graduate How is my short essay so far? Accurate?

    Hey, sorry about the above i have just read that you aim to deliver it to a non-physics audience! In that case, please ignore the above and well written!
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    Graduate How is my short essay so far? Accurate?

    I really like it and it would be great to interest non-academics for the objective of promoting cosmology within popular science but if you are proposing this essay for an academic institute I would, depending on your elected subject, include more science. Great for someone new to the subject...