Would someone be willing to read my statement for graduate school applications?

[d3nat]

Hi,

Would anyone be willing to read my statement of purpose for my graduate school applications and give me some feedback?

I wanted to stop in my academic resource center to have it looked at this week, but the writing center was all booked.

I'd prefer not to post online, so if there's anyone who's willing to message me their email address so I could send it to you, that would be really amazing.

Thank you :)

 

[d3nat]

Or I guess if people prefer I could post it on this forum?
Or through message on here?

 

[micromass]

I doubt many people are going to give their e-mail address to a stranger for this.

If you want to have good feedback, then I'm afraid you're going to have to post it here.

Warning: if you post anything here, then we will not delete it. So your post is permanent.

 

[d3nat]

Warning: if you post anything here, then we will not delete it. So your post is permanent.

That's what I was worried about.
Does anyone know if there's something wrong with uploading your statement to a public forum?

 

[Matrix0]

I understand the importance of receiving feedback on written work, especially for graduate school applications. It is great that you are seeking out support and resources to improve your statement of purpose. However, it is important to keep in mind that the writing center and academic resource center are valuable tools for this type of feedback. I would encourage you to continue trying to schedule an appointment at the writing center, as they are often very helpful in providing constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement. If you are unable to schedule an appointment, perhaps you can reach out to a professor or mentor who can also provide valuable feedback. In any case, it is important to utilize all available resources to ensure your statement of purpose is the best it can be. Best of luck with your graduate school applications!