Is There a Better Way to Phrase This Sentence About Digital I/O Modules?

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Discussion Overview

The discussion revolves around the phrasing and grammatical correctness of sentences related to digital I/O modules and their operating voltage ranges. Participants explore various ways to express these ideas more clearly and effectively, focusing on technical writing standards.

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Main Points Raised

  • One participant questions the grammatical correctness of the original sentence, suggesting it should use "ranges" instead of "range."
  • Another participant proposes rephrasing to "There are different digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range," indicating this is clearer.
  • A different suggestion includes using "variety" instead of "different" and emphasizes avoiding repetition of the same word.
  • One participant expresses a preference for the term "distinct" over "different" for technical writing, citing vagueness.
  • Participants also discuss a separate sentence regarding analog input channels and suggest various rephrasings for clarity.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

Participants generally agree that the original phrasing is unclear and suggest improvements, but there is no consensus on the best alternative phrasing. Multiple competing views on word choice and structure remain present.

Contextual Notes

Some suggestions may depend on the specific context of use, which is not fully provided in the discussion. The effectiveness of proposed phrases may vary based on the intended audience and technical standards.

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Does this sentence make sense and is there a better way to say it?

"Digital I/O modules have a variety of operating voltage range. "


what I'm trying to say is that there are different digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range rating.
 
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there are different digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range.

This sounds pretty good. You might try saying "various digital I/O modules" instead of "different."

Your original attempt is not even grammatically correct. At the very least, you should have "ranges". But it's still confusing, even when you correct the grammar.
 
david90 said:
Does this sentence make sense and is there a better way to say it?

"Digital I/O modules have a variety of operating voltage range. "what I'm trying to say is that there are different digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range rating.
It seems that if you have to state it more clearly separately so we understand what you mean, the original sentence should just be replaced by the clarified sentence, i.e.:

"There are different digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range rating."
 
A pet hate of mine is using the same word twice in a sentence ('different' in this case). How about:

"There are a variety of digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range."

"Digital IO modules can operate over different voltage ranges."

To be honest, I don't even like the word different for technical writing, it's really vague. I don't have the full context here, but how about a word like 'distinct'. It sounds smart.
 
Adyssa said:
"There are a variety of digital IO modules and each has a different operating voltage range."
You have an error here. See what it is?
 
'are' should be 'is' I think.
 
Adyssa said:
'are' should be 'is' I think.

Yup.
 
I got another question.

Is there another way to rewrite this sentence?
"The voltage range of the analog signal to be received by the analog input channel must be within the analog input channel operating voltage range rating."
 
"The analog channel's input voltage range must be observed."
 

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