Hello, I just quickly threw this together in the last 15 minutes or so and I was curious what people think? I just put it together as a fun little thing. I am open to feedback on multiple levels: If any one has suggestions for change to meter, rhyme scheme/structure, wording, etc. Or also if someone with knowledge of quantum mechanics & general relativity has any errors to nitpick I'd be glad to try and modify a bit to make it a more accurate metaphor; I myself don't have a physics background and only a very shallow understanding of it. Thanks! It's a sixteen bar verse: spontaniously birthed, a fleeting couple on borrowed energy, virtual pair unless the heart is equally shared it's not even there copenhagen affairs dependant on stares the lack of it's acknowledgement or embracement preventing it's inherent existence Schroedinger's love, nothing about my heart is permanent it may be alive, dead, a superposition: no determinance god rolling dice when the heart wants to be in two places stomach riding butterfly waves, probabilities determine the faces indefinite predictive power for what's to come whether we'll heat up and merge together like fusion inside the sun when subjected to utter isolation void of any enticing relation is there a macroscopic manifestation, is there decoherence? if no one's there to speak to my heart, can it still hear it? a heavy blackness lingers overhead, warping and curving my view shall I continue ahead, never to return just to see you?