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The discussion revolves around the verification and phrasing of a statement related to classical physics for use in a novel. Participants explore how to accurately convey the concept that an object cannot occupy two different positions simultaneously in three-dimensional space.

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Main Points Raised

  • Jacobs seeks feedback on the phrase "According to the Classical Physics, at any given time you cannot stay at more than one position in the three-dimensional space."
  • One participant suggests avoiding "the" classical physics due to the existence of multiple branches and questions the use of "stay," noting it implies a stationary state.
  • Another participant proposes a rephrased version: "According to classical physics, at any given time, a particle must have a unique position vector," and suggests specifying "classical mechanics" instead of "classical physics."
  • Discussion includes the distinction between particles and fields, with a mention of quantum physics where particles can exist in superposition.
  • Jacobs expresses concern about the complexity of the topic and the challenge of conveying scientific concepts in fiction.
  • Some participants affirm that the original phrase is acceptable with minor adjustments, emphasizing artistic freedom in writing.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

Participants do not reach a consensus on the best phrasing, with multiple suggestions and perspectives on how to accurately represent the concept in a fictional context. There is acknowledgment of the challenges in merging scientific accuracy with literary expression.

Contextual Notes

Participants highlight the nuances in classical physics terminology and the implications of phrasing choices, indicating that the discussion is influenced by varying interpretations of physical concepts.

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Need verification of "physics phrase" for novel

Dear scientists,

I am currently working on a novel, and for that I need a phrase to be verified for accuracy and validity, as I do not want to come up with something that is complete nonsense.

In plain English, I want to say that you cannot be at two different places at the same time.

My suggestion is as follows:

"According to the Classical Physics, at any given time you cannot stay at more than one position in the three-dimensional space."

How does that sound? Is it wrong with regards to the Classical Physics? Anything more accurate? Any better phrasing that refers to scientific facts?

Thanking you in advance for any comments. They do not need to be poetic.


Regards,

Jacobs
 
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Well I wouldn't say "the" classical physics, because there are many branches of classical physics, and "the" seems to imply there is just one thing called classical physics.

Why would you use the word "stay"? That suggesting something which is not moving, or stationary. Also you need to distinguish what you're referring to - wave and fields can exist in many different places, but particles don't classically.
 
Well I would rephrase what you're trying to say in a much more sterile sounding way:

"According to classical physics, at any given time, a particle must have a unique position vector." You might want to add on "with respect to a given reference frame." Plus, things like classical thermodynamics really don't talk about the exact positions of particles, so you might want to say "classical mechanics" instead.

We don't like using the hypothetical "you" in physics, and things like fields and rigid bodies actually can exist throughout extended regions of space.

In quantum physics, we often talk about particles being in a "superposition of states", and a particle which is in a superposition of two position eigenstates can be thought of as being in "two places at once."
 
Ouch, I quickly realize that I should avoid this comparison altogether, as there seems to be no simple way to explain it in a meaningful way.

That's why science is one thing, and fiction another.

Thanking you very much indeed for your efforts :-)Jacobs
 
I think it sounds just fine with the minor changes suggested by Dipole: "According to Classical Physics, at any given time you cannot be at more than one position in three-dimensional space." It's not going to be for a classical mechanics textbook, after all!
 
You are right about that. I will give it a go, taking the "artistic freedem" into consideration. The reader will get the point after all.

Thanking you very much indeed,


Jacobs
 
or even just...

According to the Classical Physics, you [or an object] cannot be at two different places at the same time.
 

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