Hm, it's not good. :-/
I would start off like this:
\[\begin{aligned}\|(x,y) + (x^{\prime},y^{\prime})\|^2 &= \langle (x,y) + (x^{\prime},y^{\prime}),(x,y) + (x^{\prime},y^{\prime})\rangle \\ &= \langle (x,y),(x,y)\rangle + \langle (x,y),(x^{\prime},y^{\prime})\rangle + \langle...