Help with Thesis Statement: Lung Cancer Prevention

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The discussion focuses on crafting a thesis statement for an essay on lung cancer prevention. The participant highlights the alarming statistic that lung cancer causes more deaths annually than all criminal and accidental deaths combined. They emphasize the importance of public awareness regarding smoking cessation as a means to reduce lung cancer risk, while also noting a general lack of awareness about other cancer types. A suggestion is made to refine the thesis statement into a comprehensive essay, with a reminder to correct spelling and grammar before submission.

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hi , I have problems with thesis statement,(already my eng is not good).ı have a intro paragraph but not thesis
maybe one of you wants to help me..ı am writing ..thanks for it.


lung cancer kills more people in one year than all criminal and accidental deaths combined.
these statics are shocking,but the good news that people are now well informed about the
risks of lung cancer.they know that their risk of contracting cancer decreases if
they either stop smoking or do not smoke at all.unfortunately,the same can not be said
for other types of cancer .many people are not aware that their everyday behavior can lead to
development of these different forms of cancer.
 
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maria curie said:
many people are not aware that their everyday behavior can lead to
development of these different forms of cancer.
This sounds like a thesis statement that you can develop further into a full essay. I assume you will correct your capitalization and spelling before submitting this as an assignment, or do you also need help with the grammatical aspects?
 
ahhhh don't remind me of english classes or to be more specific...

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i could be banned for posting my thoughts on essays.
 

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