Is My Statement of Purpose Strong Enough for the PSI Program?

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Discussion Overview

The discussion revolves around the strength and effectiveness of a participant's statement of purpose for the PSI program at the Perimeter Institute. Participants are providing feedback and suggestions for improvement, particularly focusing on accessibility and content quality.

Discussion Character

  • Homework-related, Meta-discussion

Main Points Raised

  • One participant expresses uncertainty about the strength of their statement of purpose, seeking feedback on how to improve it.
  • Another participant requests the statement to be shared as a PDF instead of images, citing access issues with the provided links.
  • A third participant confirms they also encountered access issues, noting that the links may have been taken down.
  • A mentor contributes a document titled "How to Write a Statement of Purpose," offering additional resources for the original poster.
  • A participant thanks the mentor for providing the PDF file.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

Participants generally agree on the need for accessible formats for the statement of purpose, but there is no consensus on the content or quality of the statement itself, as feedback on that aspect has not yet been provided.

Contextual Notes

There are limitations regarding the accessibility of the original statement due to broken links, which may hinder the feedback process.

Who May Find This Useful

Individuals preparing statements of purpose for academic programs, particularly non-native English speakers seeking guidance on effective writing and presentation.

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I am writing my application to the PSI program of Perimeter Institute. As I am not a native English speaker, I am not sure whether my statement of purpose is strong enough. In the application form, there is a list of topics that I can comment on in my letter, and I tried to write something about each of them. Could you give me feedback about my letter, how can I improve it?

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Can you post your statement as a PDF instead of images on an outside host machine?

I couldn't access them from your links. I get this http 1.1 404 message:

A kért weboldal nem található

A webszerver nem találja a kért fájlt.

Amennyiben Ön a keresett honlap tartalmára mutató hivatkozást követve jutott ide, kérjük, jelezze a honlap tulajdonosának a hibát.

Amennyiben Ön a honlap tulajdonosa, győződjön meg róla, hogy a kért fájl valóban létezik-e.

További információkért keresse fel operátori szolgálatunkat.
 
jedishrfu said:
I couldn't access them from your links. I get this http 1.1 404 message:

That's weird. I was able to see them a couple days ago, but they do appear to be taken down now...

@Robin04 -- Did you remove your pages?
 
Thank you Mentor for adding the .pdf file.
 
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