UCtransfer: essay and personal statement

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Discussion Overview

The discussion revolves around the requirements for essays and personal statements for transferring to the University of California (UC). Participants explore the distinctions and similarities between the two, as well as the specific topics and formats expected in the application process.

Discussion Character

  • Debate/contested
  • Homework-related

Main Points Raised

  • One participant questions whether the essay and personal statement are the same or different, citing confusion from the UC application site.
  • Another participant asserts that two separate essays are required, recalling a previous application experience that involved three essays.
  • Some participants suggest that the prompt "Choose a topic" may indicate a focus on depth rather than breadth in writing.
  • A later reply confirms that the personal statement for UC is essentially the two essays outlined in the application instructions.

Areas of Agreement / Disagreement

There is some agreement that two essays are required, but uncertainty remains regarding the terminology and whether the personal statement is simply another term for the essays.

Contextual Notes

Participants reference varying experiences and interpretations of the application requirements, indicating potential discrepancies in the information provided by the UC application site.

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As I am preparing for transfer to UCs, I know they require essay and personal statement?
what should I write on my essay and what should I write on my personal statement? Are they even two different things or same? Some people say that they are two different, but when I read about it on UC application site,
http://www.universityofcalifornia.edu/admissions/how-to-apply/personal-statement/index.html

when you read it, the link say personal statement, title says personal statement, but essay prompts and "Choose a topic for both essays.", "Compose your personal statement in a word-processing program."
 
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They want two separate essays. When I applied in 2005 there were three essays required, but I guess they have scaled back. These questions/topics are easier than when I applied. One of them was, "Tell us what you will bring to the University of California."

"Choose a topic" could be asking you to focus on one thing and write about it well, rather than list out many related things. Or it could be that they didn't completely update the copy from the previous admissions essay instructions that gave you (IIRC) several options for the topic focus. It makes sense to just go with the former idea.
 
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Math Is Hard said:
They want two separate essays. When I applied in 2005 there were three essays required, but I guess they have scaled back. These questions/topics are easier than when I applied. One of them was, "Tell us what you will bring to the University of California."

"Choose a topic" could be asking you to focus on one thing and write about it well, rather than list out many related things. Or it could be that they didn't completely update the copy from the previous admissions essay instructions that gave you (IIRC) several options for the topic focus. It makes sense to just go with the former idea.

I'm aware that they want two essays of 2 topics (1000 words total). so are you saying there is only essay and personal statement is just another term for it?
 
Acuben said:
I'm aware that they want two essays of 2 topics (1000 words total). so are you saying there is only essay and personal statement is just another term for it?

Yes. Basically, your "personal statement" for the UC is to be in the format of the two essays they have outlined.
 

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