Will you review my letter of interest?

[462chevelle]

Is there anyone that is willing to look at my letter of interest? I would just like to know what someone professional thinks about it.
Thanks.

 

[jedishrfu]

You could publish a generic version of the letter here without any identifying info and we could review it.

Is it for a job? or for an application to college?

There are many examples of these kinds of letters searchable on Google that you could compare and contrast your letter to.