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What's the point of your novel, @cube137? Because you are presenting a lot of themes, and some of the commentary seems beside the point of a plot synopsis. For example:
Most religious wars are about resources and power, beards and virgins are incidental: beards signify you're part of the tribe, virgins are the reward. But control and domination, that's the key to the why of wars.
Good oh, but you can ask yourself some questions that can help:
cube137 said:people actually got to fight war among themselves over their beliefs who amongsts their Gods have longer beard or has more virgins
Most religious wars are about resources and power, beards and virgins are incidental: beards signify you're part of the tribe, virgins are the reward. But control and domination, that's the key to the why of wars.
cube137 said:I am still thinking of the ending.
Good oh, but you can ask yourself some questions that can help:
- Is it standalone, in which case the ending needs to tie everything up
- Is it the start of a series, in which the case then ending needs to tie a lot up, but leave room for the next chapter(s)
- Do you want the reader to determine the outcome, like Inception? That's really hard, by the way, and unless done really well will be unsatisfying for readers.