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A few things.
You say this is for the MIT Think Challenge. Ok, in that case:
(1) Your English has to improve substantially to have a shot. Use sentences. Check spelling. Use actual words and not non-words like "gonna".
(2) Read the proposal materials. Looks at the examples. Look at the past winners. Are your messages here anywhere near their level of quality? You have a lot of work to do.
Frankly, you should have already done this. Applications are due in three weeks, and you don't even have an idea yet. I can assure you that the successful proposals are all written by now, even if they are not finalized and submitted.
(3) Have some humility. You know nothing about modern farming is done, but think you can do it better. This will not impress the committee, at least not favorably. This actually works against you - if you come across as a know-it-all, why devote mentoring resources to help you? You already know it all.
(5) "probabay 6000 mm battery pak" does not help you case. That's a unit of length, and not batter capacity. If you mean 6000 mAh, that's much, much less than a planter uses. If you had done your homework, you would have learned 10 gallons of diesel per hour is about what these machines use - small to medium-sized. Your batter won't power this for longer than a tiny fraction of a second.
Please do your homework.
You say this is for the MIT Think Challenge. Ok, in that case:
(1) Your English has to improve substantially to have a shot. Use sentences. Check spelling. Use actual words and not non-words like "gonna".
(2) Read the proposal materials. Looks at the examples. Look at the past winners. Are your messages here anywhere near their level of quality? You have a lot of work to do.
Frankly, you should have already done this. Applications are due in three weeks, and you don't even have an idea yet. I can assure you that the successful proposals are all written by now, even if they are not finalized and submitted.
(3) Have some humility. You know nothing about modern farming is done, but think you can do it better. This will not impress the committee, at least not favorably. This actually works against you - if you come across as a know-it-all, why devote mentoring resources to help you? You already know it all.
(5) "probabay 6000 mm battery pak" does not help you case. That's a unit of length, and not batter capacity. If you mean 6000 mAh, that's much, much less than a planter uses. If you had done your homework, you would have learned 10 gallons of diesel per hour is about what these machines use - small to medium-sized. Your batter won't power this for longer than a tiny fraction of a second.
Please do your homework.