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I have read the entire text and I will provide my suggestions below (mostly formal and very little science), from top to bottom:
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Redshift -> redshift
Dopplershift -> Doppler shift
Why is the CMB, so vital in cosmology ? (remove comma)
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There are many words that currently are capitalized, but should not be capitalized, unless they are at the start of a sentence.
These are:
Expansion, Homogeneous, Isotropic, Billion, Question, Finite, Infinite, Observable, Redshift, Recession Velocity, Gravity, Galaxy clusters, False vacuum, "Nothing", Quantum tunnel, "Universe from Nothing", "Ultimate free lunch", "Runaway expansion", Parallax, Moving Cluster Parallax
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Further suggestions:
The Observable universe from Earth is 46 Billion light years (ambiguous, use e.g. "The radius of the observable universe is...")
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"So how do we see farther than 13.772 billion years, the answer lies in expansion. As light is traveling towards us, spacetime has expanded."
This is a question without a question mark, split to e.g.
"So how do we see farther than 13.772 billion years? The answer lies in expansion; as light is traveling towards us, spacetime has expanded."
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"What is outside our Universe, this question has no meaning as without space or time you have nonexistence."
A question without question mark, split to e.g.
"What is outside our Universe? This question..."
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concensus -> consensus
non detectable->nondetectable
uniformaly->uniformly
"CMB photons were emitted at about 3000 Kelvin and are now 2.73 Kelvin blackbody radiation."
This is repeated twice. CMB is important, but not that important

.
"In all cases of Doppler" - insert "shift", I think.
"Red/Blue shifted"-> "red- or blueshifted"
"red/blue end of the spectrum. As shown by the formula below."
-> "red or blue end of the spectrum, as shown by the formula below."
"reciever"->"receiver" (twice)
"relativistic doppler formula"->"relativistic Doppler formula"
"Tansverse Doppler shift"->"transverse Doppler shift"
Insert punctuation: "Doppler shift is used to describe redshift due to inertial velocity. One example..."
"Red Shifted"->"redshifted"
"RedShift"->"redshift"
"Hubbles Law"->"Hubble's Law" (twice)
"GR"->"general relativity" (it's a newbie FAQ, remember

)
"East"->"east", "West"->"west"
"Milky way"->"Milky Way"
"distance dependant"-> e.g. "depending on distance"
"Cosmological Constant"->"The cosmological constant"
"dark energy per M
3"->"dark energy per m
3"
"small amount per M
3"->"small amount per m
3"
"Heisenburg uncertainty principle"->"Heisenberg uncertainty principle"
"One means of relating to expansion is with the use of the a grid of squares."
I suggest perhaps
"One way to describe expansion is to use a square grid."
"their is no clear concensus"->"there is no consensus"
"blackhole singularity"->"black hole singularity"
"describes Doppler between static emitter"
->"describes Doppler shift between a static emitter"
"red shift"->"redshift" (multiple)
"blue shift"->"blueshift"
"non rotating"->"nonrotating"
"Cosmic Distance ladder"->"Cosmic distance ladder"
"method's"->"methods"
"the sun"->"The Sun" (twice)
"for The AU unit. This Unit"->"for the AU unit. This unit"
"The Sun at right angle"->"The Sun at a right angle"
"the Parsec"->"the parsec"
"Standard Candles"->"Standard candles"
"In particular a Stellar objects Luminousity or brightness"
->
"In particular a stellar object's luminosity or brightness"
Luminousity -> luminosity (multiple)
"Novae"->"novae", "Supernova"->"supernova", "Galaxy clusters"->"galaxy clusters".
From your friendly office assistant, over and out.