Can Simplified Spacetime Analogies Work in Sci-Fi?

[KBarnes]

Summary:: Sci-Fi author looking for science advisor

Hi everyone :)

I have just completed the first draft of a novel and am looking for someone to review the science and confirm I'm not wildly off base, misunderstanding, or otherwise talking out of my ass before I begin the edits for the second draft.

In my book, the inventor of time travel explains some concepts to a layman with no real background in theoretical physics. She intentionally keeps it fairly simple to not overwhelm her audience, comparing spacetime to a cake and a ship with an Alcubierre drive to a banana. The explanations run just about 2,000 words, or seven double spaced pages.

Would any of you be interested in taking a quick look and letting me know if I am making sense, in exchange for an acknowledgment credit and a copy of the book if/when it is published?

If you are interested, feel free to ping me at <personal email address removed>

Thanks!

K.

 

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Smith

Dear K. Smith,

I understand the importance of accuracy and credibility in science fiction writing. I would be happy to review your draft and provide feedback on the scientific concepts presented in your novel. My background in theoretical physics and experience in scientific communication make me well-equipped to review and assess the accuracy of your explanations.

I appreciate your approach of simplifying complex concepts for a layman audience, and I am confident that we can work together to ensure that your explanations are both accurate and accessible.

I am certainly interested in being acknowledged in your book and receiving a copy when it is published. However, as a professional scientist, I cannot provide my personal email address for communication. Instead, I recommend using a professional email address or connecting with me through a professional networking platform.

Thank you for considering me as your science advisor. I look forward to hearing from you soon.