Careful said:
None of those are electrically neutral so they cannot gluons, You said the point was to construct gluons from quarks attached to a string and now you are constructing something else.
Ah, I see now the confusion! Big one, my fault. My point was the reversal: to consider gluons as equal to the the QCD string, and attach quarks to them in order to build the susy scalars (and thus match to the d.o.f of quarks).
Indeed your construction is the right one to build 8 gluons from 3 quarks, and I keep thinking about if it has a meaning too, beyond the usual of representation theory. In my construction, symmetrization wipes the d.o.f. of gluons from 8 to 3, in your construction the pairs allow to go from 3 to 8. This is the expected working of SU(3), juggling between adjoint and fundamental representations, of course.
I didn't think about these issues, but which ones are the five light quarks? I know the top quark is 40 times heavier than the bottom quark, but 40 is still a small number.
From the mechanism I sketched, a "light" quark is a quark that you can attach at the end of the string. Somehow, Nature gets to incorporate this "ban to attachment" in the top quark, it decays faster than the theoretical half-life of a possible 'toponium' meson. From naturalness principle, these five quarks should have a hidden symmetry protecting them when, at electroweak symmetry breaking, the top gets its mass. We don't know what this symmetry is, as far as I have read.
I can build whatever I want to, if you claim to have an alternative theory for the gluons then you will have to explain why the very legitimate representation I constructed is not allowed.
But it is! When your construction is applied to SU(3) colour, it produces the colour octet. When it is applied to (u,d,s), it produces the famous flavour octet of GellMann. And when applied to families, as you did, it seems to produce again the same content that gluons, and then one is left wondering if there is a relationship between SU(3) family and SU(3) colour. I think this path was pursued in the literature in the late seventies.
So, I constructed 8 bosonic particles from quarks, nothing you wrote suggests you do the same.
What I build was different: I built 18 (=3x(3x2)) particles of charge +2/3, 18 of charge -2/3, 18 of charge -1/3 and 18 of charge +1/3 by putting quarks at the extremes of the QCD string. Again, sorry the confusion.
You seem to introduce moreover some new continuous group SU(5) (?) without any motivation where it comes from (SU(3) has no 5 dimensional representation).
Yes, I did it to illustrate the symmetrization, I called it flavour space instead of naming explicitly as SU(5). I though that it followed from my remark on five light quarks, in the typical way that flavour symmetry is always described. The only difference is that usually the SU(3) flavour inside of SU(5) flavour is built only from mass, they take the u,d,s out of the u,d,s,c,b set. I consider all the five quarks equally massless, and I try to commute with electrical charge, so I take d,s,b in my illustration.
In fact, I feel that to use SU(5) in this way is correct because besides finding six +2/3 and six -1/3 in the 15 of 5x5, you can notice that the 24 in 5x
5=24+1 happens to contain 6 states of charge +1, 6 of charge -1, and 12 neutrals. That is three generations of sleptons.