Need an engineer's perspective on a college essay

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The forum discussion centers on a high school senior seeking feedback on an essay for the University of Virginia's engineering program. The essay prompt asks for a proposed small engineering project, with suggestions including three-phase relays and soft starters for motors. Participants express willingness to review the essay, emphasizing the importance of industry-relevant applications in engineering projects. The discussion highlights the collaborative nature of engineering education and the value of peer feedback.

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  • Understanding of electrical engineering concepts, particularly relays and motor starters.
  • Familiarity with the University of Virginia's engineering program requirements.
  • Basic essay writing skills, especially for technical subjects.
  • Knowledge of project proposal structures in engineering contexts.
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  • Research the applications and design of three-phase relays in industrial settings.
  • Explore the functionality and implementation of soft starters for electric motors.
  • Study effective technical writing techniques for engineering essays.
  • Investigate the University of Virginia's engineering curriculum and admission criteria.
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High school students applying to engineering programs, electrical engineering enthusiasts, and individuals seeking to improve their technical writing skills.

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Hello! I am new to the forums! (Love the F=MA and P=MV questions that they ask you when registering!)

I need some feedback on an essay that I am writing for the UVa supplement. Would someone be willing to help?

The prompt is- If you were given funding for a small engineering project, what would you do?

Post here and I will email or PM it to you.
 
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I am electrical and electronics engineer, and i would suggest a project used in the industry in such case there will be a lot of applications where your product will be used in.
Maybe you can start with small products like 3 phase relay, single phase relay up to more complex like soft starters for motors.
 
I am sorry if I was vague in my original post. I am a senior in high school and applying to the undergraduate engineering department at University of Virginia.

I already have an idea and an essay written. I just need someone to check to see if what I have is fundamentally correct.

Sorry I can't post my essay here but I can PM or email it to anyone who is willing to help.
 
I'll take a look. I'm a ChemE Senior at an engineering school
 

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