Are These Sentences Correct for My Thesis?

[n0_3sc]

English in school would've been more exciting had they spent more time teaching what's been said in this thread. It feels as if they just touched on the basics.
I've learned more here than studying Shakespeare or poetry...

 

[Chi Meson]

English in school would've been more exciting had they spent more time teaching what's been said in this thread. It feels as if they just touched on the basics.
I've learned more here than studying Shakespeare or poetry...

But when it comes the time ere thesis due
and thru' the twilight hours do strike thine keys
You will have Shakespeare's lofty crown on you
with idiom fine as molecular breeze.

and that's all that matters. Because science departments just love iambic pentameter.

 

[epenguin]

You reminded me


'For your Professor pray prepare
no paragraph Sir overlook!
And soon you will become aware
He never deviates from the book
But write it down Sir, every bit!
As though the Holy Ghost dictated it!'

 

[n0_3sc]

^^ oh crap, what have I done!

 

[Chi Meson]

You reminded me


'For your Professor pray prepare
no paragraph Sir overlook!
And soon you will become aware
He never deviates from the book
But write it down Sir, every bit!
As though the Holy Ghost dictated it!'

Quadrameter is for sissies!