My daughter's first music single....'Confined'

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The thread discusses the release of a music single titled 'Confined' by a participant's daughter, highlighting her involvement in all aspects of the song's creation, including lyrics, music, and performance. Participants share their thoughts on the song's artistic qualities and themes.

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  • One participant expresses admiration for the daughter's talent.
  • Another participant comments on the inspiring nature of the lyrics, drawing a parallel to Joan Baez's thematic approach in songwriting.
  • A participant notes the use of "breath and light" as symbols for existence in the lyrics, suggesting a deeper thematic exploration of confinement.
  • The original poster acknowledges the feedback and expresses appreciation for the discussion, indicating interest in Joan Baez's work.

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Hi,

My daughter's first ever song, titled 'Confined' got published on Spotify/YouTube and few other websites. She did the complete work by herself, including lyrics, music, singing, guitar and Piano. Would like to request all of you to please support her by listening/subscribing to the song and forwarding it to people who might be interested. Your support will go a long way for the 17 year old.

Here are the Spotify and Youtube links.

Spotify:

YouTube:

Lyrics:

Confined to this space until they arise,
Patiently waiting for the big surprise.
Eyes locked up and arms put to rest,
Each night presents the hardest test.

A few hours in and I’m already up,
Trying to cover the eternal buildup.
Standing up on my own,
I couldn’t do it, I should have known.
Maybe another day when it all clears,
It ain’t me facing all my fears.

Blinds make way for the long awaited rays,
The floor lights up with the shiniest layer of glaze.
Despite this heavenly victory,
The hours present a mere mystery.

Gasping for breath among silent cries,
Soon got to pay for all my highs.
Standing up on my own,
I couldn’t do it, I should have known.
Maybe another day when it all clears,
It ain’t me facing all my fears.

The end of the tunnel shines a light,
Silence creeps in at the dead of night.
You can never find the truth,
‘Till you draw the blinds.
You can never save your youth,
Living life buried in lies.

A few hours in and I’m already up,
Trying to cover the eternal buildup.
Standing up on my own,
I couldn’t do it, I should have known.
 
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She's very talented.
 
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Inspiring poetry. Joan Baez often presented a theme, such as love lost, then worked and weaved the theme through the verses to a conclusion. Lisha begins her lyrics with the theme of confinement that reveals itself through "breath and light" as a symbol for existence.
 
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Thanks jedishrfu and Klystron for taking time to write. Really appreciate.

Looked at Joan Baez and her songs. Looks interesting.
 
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