You ask about the error in the measurement of the clock. I ask about the value of it.
As far as clocks are concerned, yours is an excellent example. Let us consider two observers, you and me. You body is in motion through space. Consider that chemical processes are going on within your body, metabolism, etc. My body is in motion through space, in the same way. They are not moving through space at the same rate of time. How is it relevant that we can use some objective third object to measure time? My rate of motion through time is different from your motion through time, as my body interacts with space in a manner different from yours. Using a light clock, or a mechanical clock, or watching the sun rise and set is very useful to create an objective time for us to share. However, how can you consider it completely applicable to either of us, let alone to both of us? Where is the effect of the interaction of space-time? If you are searching for a close approximation, as close as is possible given that you must use a clock, then I accept your example as close, forgiving the fact that you must use a clock.
If you use a clock as an objective way to relate your motion through space-time with mine, then you are ignoring the fact that each object has a unique relationship to space-time.
How can you compare two unique objects in space-time by relating them to a third, irrelevant object in space-time? What is the value of your comparsion. It does have value, I admit. Do you recognize its limitation?