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Pretty unlike me, but I've waited until the last minute to put together my statement. Finals (and grant proposals and having to fly out of town for both GRE's (not offered at my school)) reallllly got the best of me this year, but it is what it is at this point. I was hoping that someone would look over my SOP for UCSB due tomorrow and give suggestions for it. I really need to reduce my word count a bit and figure out how to work in references to programs at the university [I have specific interests in mind but I'm having difficulty making plugs for them]. I'm trying to keep it under 1000 words.
Statement of Purpose Super Rough Draft..
Condensed matter physics lives at the crossroads of simplicity and complexity, and thus, theory and application. The subject matter is a charming study and -[STRIKE] unlike many of its aloof cousins[/STRIKE]- has immediate potential to improve aspects of human life. For these reasons I have chosen to study it and I would like to continue my education at UCSB where I will be surrounded with a energetic research atmosphere with many attractive research opportunities, especially in the fields of HTSC and frustrated magnetism. While I have strived to be a physicist since the age of twelve, over the past few years I have found my passion falls into these vast and supple fields. My interest in condensed matter is rooted in a series of undergraduate research experiences that have not only added to my skill set, but also to my love of the subject.
My enchantment with CMP started in the lab of Dr. S, a prominent photochemist at ABC University. As a young student I was given lofty goals by my advisor, namely, to continue the project of a previous chemical physics postdoc on Vitamin D field cholesterols: conducting experiments, working with data and developing methods to improve results. Shortly after joining this lab I became completely submerged in the physics of phototransitions, reading every book I could find in the lab. It became clear to me that I desired to study this kind of physics and I should pursue it. While I didn’t complete the project I developed crystallization methods which improved yields and paved the way for the next postdoc to isolate the necessary conformers. I left the lab with a year’s worth of experimental experience, newly found data mining skills and a renewed appetite for physics.
Soon after my last semester with Dr. S, I took a course in partial differential equations which I found to be particularly enticing. My enthusiasm caught the eye of my professor, Dr. Z, who suggested I do a DIS (Directed Individual Study) with him on a new project of his related to Bose-Einstein Condensates. This year working with Dr. Z has turned out to be one of the greatest experiences of my undergraduate career, producing two manuscripts to be published on his return from sabbatical.
The first manuscript reflects interesting results on a self-dual form of the Gross-Pitaevskii Equation (SDPDE) and is the subject of my honors thesis. The equation turned out to be mathematically fertile, producing many useful results. With my advisor, I spent months exploring many aspects of the SDGPE, such as the numerical solutions, stability, time evolution, uniqueness, integrability and a wealth of other structures that were of theoretical importance. Most importantly I was given a large amount of independence. I was driven to read more on techniques in applied math and many body physics which resulted in my discovery of a closed form solution to our PDE and a set of algebraic relations that put constraints on further solutions. Additionally, I found a physical representation of the SDGPE in the form of an appealing two-body Hamiltonian which produces the equation after a mean field treatment. Overall the study was very fruitful and the publication of this manuscript is a very exciting prospect for both my advisor and myself.
The second manuscript is of my own imagination with the goal of studying the behavior of a system of BECs when subject to a random spatial perturbation of the potential, much like one might expect in an experimental setting. Early in the 2013 spring semester the merit of my research with Dr. Musslimani earned me an NSF travel award to the 8th international IMACS conference to give a powerpoint presentation on my work. With the primary project far from complete, I proposed putting my new skills to use in a computationally focused project. In an intense two weeks I read relevant papers, generated numerical programs based on spectral methods, and put my results together in a meaningful way to present at the conference, essentially with no help. The experience was rewarding and my success was reassuring for my ability to conduct research professionally. This project has earned me a number of awards, a public presentation of my work, and a spot as a featured student of my university. The past semester I have been working to generalize the premise of my work to two dimensional systems, integrating it with the work of another of Dr. Z’s graduate students. This too has plans for publication in the near future.
I regained contact with Dr. S and worked on a simulation based project in the computational lab of Dr. Yang. I spent the summer learning CHARMm and writing simulations for the reaction I had studied previously in hopes of predicting some spectra which were yet to be obtained due to the instability of the confermer. This work was much more difficult than anticipated, but significant amount of progress was made such to help a new paper by Dr. S.
Though my advisor has been away, I have not quit in my pursuit of research opportunities. By invitation of Dr. V I audited a course on many body physics this semester in order to continue improving my competence in the research. The class inspired my interests in the fields of high temperature superconductivity and frustrated magnetism, two forefront fields at UCSB. Dr. V is the professor who directed my attention to UCSB, specifically to the wide focus Dr. B's group which is centered around my interests. After reviewing ... In the coming semester I have plants to join Dr. Vs group to work on research realted to HTSC systems while also auditing his superconductivity course.
Annnnnd that's what I have so far
Condensed matter physics lives at the crossroads of simplicity and complexity, and thus, theory and application. The subject matter is a charming study and -[STRIKE] unlike many of its aloof cousins[/STRIKE]- has immediate potential to improve aspects of human life. For these reasons I have chosen to study it and I would like to continue my education at UCSB where I will be surrounded with a energetic research atmosphere with many attractive research opportunities, especially in the fields of HTSC and frustrated magnetism. While I have strived to be a physicist since the age of twelve, over the past few years I have found my passion falls into these vast and supple fields. My interest in condensed matter is rooted in a series of undergraduate research experiences that have not only added to my skill set, but also to my love of the subject.
My enchantment with CMP started in the lab of Dr. S, a prominent photochemist at ABC University. As a young student I was given lofty goals by my advisor, namely, to continue the project of a previous chemical physics postdoc on Vitamin D field cholesterols: conducting experiments, working with data and developing methods to improve results. Shortly after joining this lab I became completely submerged in the physics of phototransitions, reading every book I could find in the lab. It became clear to me that I desired to study this kind of physics and I should pursue it. While I didn’t complete the project I developed crystallization methods which improved yields and paved the way for the next postdoc to isolate the necessary conformers. I left the lab with a year’s worth of experimental experience, newly found data mining skills and a renewed appetite for physics.
Soon after my last semester with Dr. S, I took a course in partial differential equations which I found to be particularly enticing. My enthusiasm caught the eye of my professor, Dr. Z, who suggested I do a DIS (Directed Individual Study) with him on a new project of his related to Bose-Einstein Condensates. This year working with Dr. Z has turned out to be one of the greatest experiences of my undergraduate career, producing two manuscripts to be published on his return from sabbatical.
The first manuscript reflects interesting results on a self-dual form of the Gross-Pitaevskii Equation (SDPDE) and is the subject of my honors thesis. The equation turned out to be mathematically fertile, producing many useful results. With my advisor, I spent months exploring many aspects of the SDGPE, such as the numerical solutions, stability, time evolution, uniqueness, integrability and a wealth of other structures that were of theoretical importance. Most importantly I was given a large amount of independence. I was driven to read more on techniques in applied math and many body physics which resulted in my discovery of a closed form solution to our PDE and a set of algebraic relations that put constraints on further solutions. Additionally, I found a physical representation of the SDGPE in the form of an appealing two-body Hamiltonian which produces the equation after a mean field treatment. Overall the study was very fruitful and the publication of this manuscript is a very exciting prospect for both my advisor and myself.
The second manuscript is of my own imagination with the goal of studying the behavior of a system of BECs when subject to a random spatial perturbation of the potential, much like one might expect in an experimental setting. Early in the 2013 spring semester the merit of my research with Dr. Musslimani earned me an NSF travel award to the 8th international IMACS conference to give a powerpoint presentation on my work. With the primary project far from complete, I proposed putting my new skills to use in a computationally focused project. In an intense two weeks I read relevant papers, generated numerical programs based on spectral methods, and put my results together in a meaningful way to present at the conference, essentially with no help. The experience was rewarding and my success was reassuring for my ability to conduct research professionally. This project has earned me a number of awards, a public presentation of my work, and a spot as a featured student of my university. The past semester I have been working to generalize the premise of my work to two dimensional systems, integrating it with the work of another of Dr. Z’s graduate students. This too has plans for publication in the near future.
I regained contact with Dr. S and worked on a simulation based project in the computational lab of Dr. Yang. I spent the summer learning CHARMm and writing simulations for the reaction I had studied previously in hopes of predicting some spectra which were yet to be obtained due to the instability of the confermer. This work was much more difficult than anticipated, but significant amount of progress was made such to help a new paper by Dr. S.
Though my advisor has been away, I have not quit in my pursuit of research opportunities. By invitation of Dr. V I audited a course on many body physics this semester in order to continue improving my competence in the research. The class inspired my interests in the fields of high temperature superconductivity and frustrated magnetism, two forefront fields at UCSB. Dr. V is the professor who directed my attention to UCSB, specifically to the wide focus Dr. B's group which is centered around my interests. After reviewing ... In the coming semester I have plants to join Dr. Vs group to work on research realted to HTSC systems while also auditing his superconductivity course.
Annnnnd that's what I have so far
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