Thanks Chronos! The abstract -I asked a friend for help here- was intentionally vague, to avoid excessive claims but still to insinuate that a browsing across the whole paper could be interesting... Ohwilleke scores in all, or almost all, of his remarks. Yes, time ago I already abandoned any pretension of grammar beyond the concordance of indexes (indices?). Almost every grammatical failure gets at least 9000 hits if you google for it. And well, sometimes even concordance fails 8-(
As for the suggestion for the second paragraph goes, one is tempted to admit it, but there is a pair of caveats. First, that most authors use a precise mathematical scheme, say GUT or Technicolor or Goldstone bosons or whatever, and from there they are a lot more restricted that Hans and me. Second, that we use the values of the mass of W and Z, and the value of tau. Such quantities were not at the reach of model builders in the 1970. When they were, the ball of model building was already in other roofs: SUSY, ETC, string inspired models, &c.
Now, has our numerical observation some relevance beyond Spontaneus Symmetry Breaking? I think it could have. The last equation, having inverse of mass, feels as if it could had some metric information. Remember that mass can be interpreted as inverse of distance; the mass of the Higgs in non commutative geometry models is traditionally related to the separation, in a 5th dimension, between two 4-sheets of space time. Here the broken symmetry bosons could by hinting their own geometrical role, somehow controlled, or controlling, the generation spectra. Still, this formula was obtained from the second order corrections; another ones could fit there too.
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ETC: Extended TechniColor
&c: EtCetera.