[URL='https://www.physicsforums.com/insights/author/urs-schreiber/']Urs Schreiber[/URL] said:
To repeat, there is a detailed pedestrian introduction at
geometry of physics -- smooth sets . I am getting the impression you have not actually looked at that yet. If you get distracted by the top level "Idea"-section you should jump right to where the discussion starts at "
Model layer" (meaning: the down-to-earth version of the stroy) which starts out with the inviting sentence:
In this Model Layer we discuss concretely the definition of smooth spaces and of homomorphisms between them, together with basic examples and properties.
Well, I didn't know this page. In
pAQFT 1: A first idea of quantum fields, you referred at the first mention to
smooth sets, which is quite abstract. You should have referred instead to the page you just mentioned, and you should add your present comment there at the top.
In
geometry of physics -- smooth sets, Definition 2.1 is still unmathematical and hence empty. It doesn't tell what sort of formal object a plot is, and it is not explained afterwards either. I guess you mean ''The elements of ##X(R^n)## are referred to as plots of ##X##'? This should then be part of Definition 2.2.1.
In Definition 2.2.2 it is clearer to write ''for each
smooth function ##f## (called in the present context an abstract coordinate transformation)'' in place of ''for each abstract coordinate transformation, hence for each
smooth function ##f##...'' and property 2.2.2 would read clearer if you wouldn't talk informally about change but only about composition. The informal interpretation (''to be thought of'') should not be part of the definition (which should be pure mathematics, introducing concepts, names, notation and properties) but a comment afterwards that adds intuition to the stuff introduced.
''But there is one more consistency condition'' - Is this still part of the definition, or is this a preamble to the definition of a smooth space in Definition 2.6?
And at that point (or later) I still don't know what a smooth set is! Is it just another word for a smooth space? Then why have two very similar names for it?
Nowhere the connection is made to diffeological spaces and to manifolds (except in a introductory sentence superficially justified very late in Remark 2.29, which is again quite abstract and does not make the connection transparent). But these should be the prime examples and hence figure prominently directly after Definition 2.2, to connect the general abstract concept to traditional objects more likely to be familiar to the reader. The example of the irrational torus as a diffeological space which is not a manifold would be instructive.