I’m going to take the unusual step here to re-writing the OP in the level of quality and rigor I think the forum rules require and respectful treatment of readers deserves. I’ll do my best to match the intent of the OP, just in higher quality and more depth, while being succinct enough to be a reasonable. Please note: I don’t mean any offense by this, but I may be including statements I know to be erroneous and analysis I believe to be faulty/misleading/incomplete based on my perception in the thread – even things already pointed out. It will also mix-in quotes and paraphrases from the actual OP. This is all intentional to write this as a re-do of the starting point. I’ll also provide a little bit of structural guidance (and associated explanation) that wouldn’t typically be included in order to highlight the structure. I don’t actually advocate following a real template. This is intended to be serious; I will not throw in any “how could you do this to us you evil baby boomers!” silly shots in unless I think they truly, accurately reflect the intent of the OP. So, here we go:
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By Statguy2000 via Russ Watters
Intro
Hi everyone. I thought I'd point out some disturbing news related to the Millennial generation (those born in 1980 and afterwards) in the US:
Fact(S) to be Discussed [1]
http://www.pewsocialtrends.org/2011/11/07/chapter-2-income-poverty-employment/
Over time, more of those in the younger generations (under 35) are in poverty even as the older generations (over 65) have been improving. 30 years ago, the poverty rate for these groups was about equal at 17% whereas today the poverty rate among millennials is 22% and the poverty rate for baby boomers is about 11%. There is a lot of related contextual information in the multi-page article linked and I encourage everyone to read at least the page linked, on income, poverty and employment rates for more insight. [2]
Analysis of the Facts [3]
The graph shows long-term, continuous decline in the standard of living of young people that cannot be explained away as temporary due to the Great Recession or caused by “lazy millennials”.
Extension/Prediction [4]
This shows permanent injury to millennials that will in the future reverse the trend of improving standard of living for older people, causing millennials to spend their entire lives at lower standards of living than their predecessors.
Reaction [5]
What is striking is how this is not causing greater alarm with the broad fabric of American society that the younger generation has fewer opportunities for advancement and are living in poverty.
The end
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You should all note that this sample post contains most of the words of the OP verbatim, just more detail and a clear separation between facts and opinions. This clear separation is maintained even if you remove the headers from each section. And its not even a lot longer; take away the image and it is perhaps only twice as long.
[1] Just the facts. No reaction, analysis, anything. Just the actual data, a link to the data and its background and a re-stating of the facts in my own words. This is intentionally dry in order to start the discussion off from a place of agreement; everyone should agree that facts are facts. And everyone must be afforded the opportunity to look at the facts being claimed. If we can’t even agree on a starting point and/or people aren’t given an opportunity to look for themselves, the discussion is unlikely to become productive.
[2] Everything to this point is the minimum I would consider acceptable as a starting point for discussion. It at least tells everyone reading what the topic data is and where the data came from. The next section is preferred but it is more common for people to just take a glance at facts and post an initial reaction without analyzing where the numbers came from and how they came to be.
[3] Analysis should be closely fact-adjacent, putting the facts in the context of other facts and describing relationships and trends. Still no opinions. I won’t call this section mandatory because it takes some analytical skill and emotional detachment to be able to provide opinion-free interpretation. It is a component of a high quality post, but is more than I think can realistically be expected from everyone.
[4] Here’s where the gloves start to come off. Predictions are by definition speculative and reflective of our biases, such as confidence level in the direction of a trend that isn’t consistent. This is where deviation from academic analysis really starts because for academic analysis, that’s not good enough: you need mathematical modeling, not gut instinct, to make the predictions. What I did here doesn’t even reflect trendlines the graphs could generate. This section I do consider mandatory.
[5] Here, the gloves are totally off. This is pure opinion and emotion. But since this isn’t the entirety of the content of the post, we have some real meat that came before it to understand where this opinion/reaction came from – and we [responsible responders] start at the top and work through, not at the bottom, trading emotional reaction punches in the dark. This section is optional and even discouraged, but is typically included.
So,
@StatGuy2000 I invite you to take a day to review and edit this to make it your own, if you choose to. After that, I’ll respond to “your” new opening post. I sincerely hope people see this as a sincere explanation of what I'm looking to see. It's an unusual post, but an honest effort at a teaching moment.