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You wonder...
Enjoy the moonlight that passes by most nights,
This miracle happens before dreams begin,
During the night after everyone dimmed the lights,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
It's less of a mystery when you find someone perfect for you,
Everyday is like an incredible dream that you can never have imagined,
A dream where the full moon is bright over your soft closed eyes,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
The feelings you experience with this person are real and ecstatic,
After sharing the beauty of the moonlight together,
There is never a day that goes by where you forget,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
The moonlight passes by most nights,
The miracle of living a night beyond what a dream can offer,
May only happen once in a lifetime,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
You can bear one moonless night; You can not bear one dreamless night,
Make the best of the nights that are followed by the one you admire,
Enjoy the moonlight together by looking at the moon shortly before midnight,
This will make you wonder about beautiful things.
You wonder...
Enjoy the moonlight that passes by most nights,
This miracle happens before dreams begin,
During the night after everyone dimmed the lights,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
It's less of a mystery when you find someone perfect for you,
Everyday is like an incredible dream that you can never have imagined,
A dream where the full moon is bright over your soft closed eyes,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
The feelings you experience with this person are real and ecstatic,
After sharing the beauty of the moonlight together,
There is never a day that goes by where you forget,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
The moonlight passes by most nights,
The miracle of living a night beyond what a dream can offer,
May only happen once in a lifetime,
It makes you wonder about beautiful things.
You can bear one moonless night; You can not bear one dreamless night,
Make the best of the nights that are followed by the one you admire,
Enjoy the moonlight together by looking at the moon shortly before midnight,
This will make you wonder about beautiful things.