Hi Marlon,
Your introduction to LQG has grown to over two pages.
One reason I like it is that it is direct, concrete, and brief
(not ever using more words than necessary)
so it is a good introduction for the practical working physicist.
I can not think of any intelligent suggestion to change what you have
written. I only hope you will sometime write a second chapter
when you see a clear way to continue
(the quantum states of gravity, how they form a Hilbert space?)
Some English-speakers may wish that you would spell vector as is normal
in English and also that you would write diffeomorphism as they are used
to see it. But I am happy to see words spelled as in German (I like the language).
I agree with you that the tangent space of a Lie group, at the identity, has a Lie algebra structure. I visualize a connection as being (at every point of the manifold) a linear map from the tangent space to a Lie algebra (which I think of as infinitesimal rotations).
So when I read your second paragraph on page 2, I feel mostly OK but a little confused because the language does not seem as clear as it is other places----you say: "When we start in A we actually take a tangent vektor. This is an element of the tangent space of the manifold at point A. The transformation that is used to go from a point A on the manifold to the tangential space is called a projection. This tangent space can be turned into a socalled the Lie-Algebra,.." this part might need some work.
In third paragraph of page 2 you say "paragraphe" with an e at the end. This spelling is too French for my taste. You should either say paragraph as in English or else paragraf.
You see my comments are mostly trivial----about spelling! I regret not having more serious comments, but cannot think of any right now.
In the last complete paragraph on page 1 you say "fysical" instead of normal english spelling physical.
thanks so much for contributing this essay! I hope you will be content, at least for now, with only these minor comments.