Yes, your calculation seems correct, but a few things to consider:
1) You might want to check the math again. I obtained 16.168 kJ/mol. The discrepancy might be because you approximated the value to be 600J/kg.
2) From
wikipedia, we have:
1 kJ·mol−1 is equal to 0.239
kcal·mol−1 or 1.04×10−2
eV per particle.
So, if this is one way to convert if you have good memory!
3) While your calculation is correct, I find it rather long. In fact, if you notice, 1/(35.6(mol/kg)*28.0855*1.66054*10^-27(kg))=6.023078*10^23 /mol, which is the Avogadro constant!
4) In view of point 3, in fact, you can directly compute using (check units by cancelling them like in fractions):
4530eV/270000atoms * 1.6*10^-19 (J/eV)* 6.022*10^23 (atoms/mol) = 16.168kJ/mol.
Indeed, 1.6*10^-19*6.022*10^23 = 96352 J/mol, which converts 1.04*10^-2eV to 1kJ/ mol in point 1!