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Sorry! said:Agreed, this is a very important aspect in my opinion on writing essays.
Agree with this too.
Agree with this too! (Georgina on a roll). Every paper I wrote semi-colons were only to be used in a 'must use' situation. Reason being is that they are most of the time unnecessary and they are hard to know for sure you've used correctly. They must have two independant clauses on either side or be used as a 'super-comma' in a list. Sometimes you've used it correctly but other times the clauses weren't independent so the semi-colon is wrong to use.
Second that.
I'm not trying to be harsh on your writing syle it's just that all the things that Georgina had pointed out I had noticed while reading too. I just figured that if I told you about it that you would just dismiss it mostly because 'your prof. doesn't mind.' In my opinion these exercises should be about making you a better writer for the future and not to get you a passing grade.
I would have gone through the essay last night making detailed edits but again, as Georgina pointed out the essay was posted in .pdf format which I can not edit.
About the contractions... I'm not taking it lightly. Thanks to your recommendation, in the future, I will try to avoid them entirely, however, I believe that it's not worth the trouble of fixing on this paper.
Thanks for the criticism, both of you. I really didn't noticed that I overused semicolons... If anthing I would think that I overused colons leading into quotations.
Quick question, if a colon precedes a quotation, does the quotation need to be an independent clause?
Also, thanks for catching the pronoun miss usage, for some reason it made sense at the time, hopefully I would have caught it in my own proof of the paper (which I hate yet to do, but I have a hard copy and a red pen to make it easier to find errors... there's something about the printed form that helps me see my mistakes.)
EDIT: Turned it in earlier today, Thanks for the help!
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