Well, thanks again for more input. I guess ultimately my goal was to represent curved space time in a simpler way, so the results would not contradict GR, to the degree I was able to examine them. The mathematics of GR are brutally formidable, very difficult even for many physicists. I've read that mathematical solutions can be likened to climbing a mountain. There can be many routes to the top, but instead of slogging up the slope, the ideal is to get in a mathematical helicopter, and just fly straight to the top. No one argues that GR is incorrect, but that doesn't mean there isn't a simpler mathematical route to the same answers.
My analogy is certainly better than the rubber sheet analogy (its prediction alone trumps the sheet), and I would be pleased to make that small contribution, but to accept the analogy, one has to accept its consequences, and they're, at least, interesting, so I want to explore them if I can. Let me know if you have any advice as to how I might be able to get a physicist to do an orbital calculation. Paying a consultant for the privilege would be fine.
One last thing, the analogy defines the maximum possible velocity for mass as when time goes to zero. I can see that it would have to be the speed of light, so if you show that the time dilation on the surface of the Earth is equal to the time dilation at the Earth's escape velocity, do we then have enough information to calculate the speed when time goes to zero. I assume not.