Hacky,
It might help to compare it with
this one.
His first postulate amounts to "motion is relative", a'la Galileo.
He uses the equation of motion of a particle (eqn 4.1) for the same purpose as Pal uses a (metaphorical) rigid rod: The transformation function preserves the uniformity. In Pal, a span "here" and a span "there" that are the same length (e.g. move a rod) will also be seen as the same (possibly different) length in S'. In Lawden, the distance traveled by a particle in a given duration is the same at different times. The choice of duration doesn't matter, so you don't have to worry about what it was in S' -- he choses his own. But in S', he also sees the particle move the same distance in any period of the same duration.
He then says that a sphere of light maps from one coordinate system to the other. This is the "light cone" at one specific slice. That is pretty much the defining characteristic of Minkowski space-time (the "metric"), so you have enough information to derive the function to translate from S to S'.
As for the rotation, the x4 axis is the t axis, but using imaginary numbers so as to flip the sign in the "metric" calculation and be able to use a plain summation in (eq 4.9). If you didn't do that, but defined the metric to be the square root of x squared
minus t squared, in a normal Cartesian plane, then you can see that "acceleration" (change in velocity) is a hyperbolic rotation about the origin. No imaginary angles needed.
I admit, I can't follow what he said between (5.5) and (5.6).
For section 5 in general, he finished off 4 by saying it is, in general, a linear transform R4->R4. He begins section 5 by saying "suppose it is a rotation". That is indeed an example of a linear transform, but I don't see the point. His x4 axis is leaning the opposite way it is drawn in x-t diagrams. I think he ends up by saying it was an inspired guess; the result fits the previous constraints. Wouldn't that be more of a proof than a derivation?
I think that part is saying that, given the proposed transform, and that an event has a different location in S and in S', back out the parameter for how far the rotation was.
—John