Admissions What Should You Know About Admissions Essays and Statements of Purpose?

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The discussion centers on the application process for two major universities, focusing on the required essays: one on a personal topic of interest, specifically fossil fuels, and a 'statement of purpose' essay. The writer seeks clarity on whether admissions essays typically require citations and expresses confusion about the purpose of the statement of purpose, which seems to overlap with an optional essay prompt about personal experiences. The statement of purpose should convey unique aspects of the applicant's background and motivations for attending the university, rather than simply listing accomplishments. The writer is encouraged to reflect on their reasons for attending college and how they can contribute to the university community, using these insights to shape both essays. The urgency of the approaching deadlines adds to the need for clear guidance on these essay requirements.
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Well, pursuant to my other thread (Undergrad Engineering Schools), I've decided to apply at the two big name universities and see what happens. They require a couple essays. One is a topic of special interest to me. The other is a 'statement of purpose' essay.

I'm doing the former on fossil fuels. It's not directly related to my major, but it's something I feel very strongly about. It's supposed to be about one page in length, and doesn't say anything about citing sources or being an 'academic paper'. The prompt specifically says: "Choose an issue of importance to you – the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope – and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation." My question is, do admissions essays typically cite sources and do all that jazz?

The latter I'm completely clueless about. The prompt and the title do not match up. Just what IS a statement of purpose essay? The prompt says:

"The statement of purpose will provide an opportunity to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your application. You may also want to explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had that relate to your academic discipline. The statement of purpose is not meant to be a listing of accomplishments in high school or a record of your participation in school-related activities. Rather, this is your opportunity to address the admission committee directly and to let us know more about you as an individual, in a manner that your transcripts and the other application information cannot convey."

But that has nothing to do with my purpose of entering a university for an education. In fact, it seems a lot like an optional essay one can do, with the following prompt:

"There may be personal information that you want considered as part of your admissions application. Write an essay describing that information. You might include exceptional hardships, challenges, or opportunities that have shaped or impacted your abilities or academic credentials, personal responsibilities, exceptional achievements or talents, educational goals, or ways in which you might contribute to an institution committed to creating a diverse learning environment."

My question is, just WTH is a statement of purpose all about, and, judging from the prompts, what is the difference between the statement of purpose and the optional essay?
 
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Let me ask you two questions:

1) Why are you going to college? 2) Why do you think they should let you go to college?

Think about it for a moment. Write that down, and then edit those two for essay one and essay two.
 
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