It's good you wrote the paper because it shows clearly many of the misconceptions about the uncertainty principle.
First you need to see a correct statement of it. Suppose you have a large number of similarly prepared systems ie all are in the same quantum state. Divide them into two equal lots. In the first lot measure position to a high degree of accuracy. QM places no limit on that accuracy - its a misunderstanding of the uncertainty principle thinking it does. The result you get will have a statistical spread. In the second lot measure momentum to a high degree of accuracy - again QM places no limit on that. It will also have a statistical spread. The variances of those spreads will be as per the Heisenberg Uncertainty principle.
You correctly identify its relationship the the famous double slit - but unfortunately your treatment is a bit convoluted.
Here is a correct treatment:
http://cds.cern.ch/record/1024152/files/0703126.pdf
Note, while the above is way way better than usual pop-sci treatments its not correct either:
http://arxiv.org/abs/1009.2408
To make matters worse even that is wrong. Its a very disconcerting issue with physics that as you progress you often need to unlearn and relearn things. Its quite maddening really.
To understand the uncertainty relation you need to read an advanced book like Ballentine that carefully explains it. Discussions by the early pioneers like Heisenberg were WRONG as pointed out by Bohr. Yet get trotted out and repeated over and over again.
I know you put a lot of work into that paper and I would not be inclined to waste it. Instead learn a bit more about what it really says and use it as an example of misconceptions in physics that get corrected as you progress. Other examples you mention are wave-particle duality and complementary. They are both wrong (although complementarity is a bit too wishy washy to actually disprove, so best to use it with great care for that exact reason) but beginner texts, like micsonceptions about the uncertainty relations, promulgate it.
IMHO here is a MUCH better view of QM:
http://www.scottaaronson.com/democritus/lec9.html
Like I said see if you can make your paper about quantum misconceptions rather than scrap it. There are many of them - its actually quite insidious:
http://arxiv.org/abs/quant-ph/0609163
Also be very careful of what early QM pioneers said. With the notable exception of Dirac they were basically all wrong:
http://www.fisica.ufmg.br/~dsoares/cosmos/10/weinberg-einsteinsmistakes.pdf
The reason Dirac wasn't wrong is he basically said - shut up and calculate - although often attributed to him or Feynman it was in fact a quote from David Mermin
http://www.physicsandmore.net/resources/Shutupandcalculate.pdf
Nor do I think that is basically Copenhagen - but that is a whole new thread. Most interpretations are simply arguments about the meaning of probability:
http://math.ucr.edu/home/baez/bayes.html
Shut up and calculate doesn't worry about that either.
Thanks
Bill